How to make an AI-written testimonial request sound human

Paste it in below — the rewriter is already set to “testimonial request”, so it rewrites for the person who actually reads one. Then keep scrolling for the specific thing that gives a testimonial request away, and a before-and-after.

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The thing that gives a testimonial request away

A vague ask that guarantees a vague answer. “We would be so grateful if you could share a few words about your experience.” People freeze when asked to write copy.

It is worth being precise about this, because “sounds like AI” is not one problem. Every kind of writing has its own tell, and for a testimonial request it is the one above. Once you can see it in your own draft you will start catching it before you paste anything anywhere.

Before and after

Written by hand, not generated — a realistic AI-sounding draft and the same thing as a person would write it.

Reads like AI

We would be so incredibly grateful if you could take a brief moment to share a few words about your experience with us. Your feedback truly means the world to our entire team!

Reads like a person

Would you mind answering two questions? What was rota day like before, and what is it now? Two lines is plenty — and I’ll send you exactly what I’d quote before it goes anywhere.

Notice what actually changed: the sentence lengths stopped matching, the stock phrasing went, and the specific detail moved to the front. Nothing was added that a real writer would not have known.

Who reads a testimonial request, and what they notice

A happy customer who wants to help but has no idea what to write. Specific questions get specific quotes.

This is the whole reason the rewrite has to change with the text type. Copy that has to survive a three-second glance. Adjectives are what AI reaches for and facts are what readers act on, so this is where the rewrite pays fastest.

How to fix it yourself, without any tool

Worth knowing, because the point is to stop needing a rewriter. Four passes, five minutes:

  1. Delete the first sentence. In most AI drafts it is setup. Start at the second sentence and see whether you lost anything — usually you did not.
  2. Break the rhythm. Find three sentences of similar length in a row and cut one of them in half. That single change does more than any word swap.
  3. Put in one plain word. Formal writing with a single ordinary word in it reads as human; flawless register reads as generated.
  4. Add the detail only you have. The number, the name, the thing that happened. This is the part no rewriter can do for you, and it is the part that works.

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